Well... Some months ago I gave a promise to submit here if not the translation or sketched comic, or even a short-summary on this story (I'll still try to write it someday - maybe, once I'll have time and enough will to explain it all on English), then at least an original text on Russian. I know that it was long time ago, but because of a studying, duties on one forum and other kind of work I completely haven't had a time even to just normally re-read it and fix the literary and spelling mistakes and stupid plot "bugs" - I ran over the text and rewrote wrong moments on which even Word originally was showing red stoplights (through there are much more of them - it don't see stylistic mistakes when I see them very well -__- ). All that's because I wrote it right in the browser text window on one Russian fan-forum and many things then just haven't noticed. One of my bad habits that still exists, muahahaha...

Since then (mheh, started it on 22.11.2007 and finished on 15.12.2007. (! - I wish I could now write them so fast...)) I haven't thrown a hobby to write stories away and still keep on writing (sounds weird, but I'm writing much more than drawing), but in a little different way. It's a serious forum roleplay (that did give a start to practice on grammar, and also did give birth to many new ideas and characters) and my own huge ideas, plots... I see that I write now better than then, but.. oh well... I hope only that I'll not be ashamed of this fiction in the future. XD But that's what my imagination created, many people liked it... so, as I gave that promise, I'm submitting this.

Download link (.doc, 35 pages, verdana 8) - [link] on Rapidshare. If someone can show a better "fileholder", I'm attentively listening. I just don't know other normal ones that are not on Russian. : / Warning: It's really too much text on Russian...

One human told about web-translators... so, in help: some words that they exactly will not translate (mostly cahacter names or rare used/improvised language words).

Дэнни Фентон - Danny Fenton
Дэниэль - Daniel
Такер Фоули - Tucker F.
Сэм Мэнсон - Sam Manson
Мэдди - Maddy (right?)
Джек - Jack
Дарк - Dark (Dark Danny... shortly I called him just Dark)
Влад Мастерс/Плазмиус - Vlad Masters/Plasmius
Вульф - Wolf
Полина - Polina
Стар - Star
Квон - Kvon
Куджо - Kujo
Дэш - Dash
Джесс - Jess
Клокворк - Clockwork
Экто-лучи, эктоплазма - ecto-rays, ectoplasm...

Also. Somewhere in the middle there was a serious and stupid mistake in a plot as itself, and I still even don't know how to fix it normally (changes all the humor I tried to put in it). Then I haven't saw "Phantom Planet" for a long time, and haven't remembered that Daniel also in the end was there. In fiction she says that when she saw a giand asteroid she was randomly flying somewhere above Canadian woods XDDDD

Sorry for my weird English...

Later I'll answer on all the messages on both of my accounts... now it's almost 2.a.m. here, I'm totally sleepy X___x

Well... this is it...
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Repeating, that new art I'm submitting on my new and final account -